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Poems for No One

Poems for No One

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Mutineer By Jelaine_Uy Updated 4 days ago

Highest Rank: #1 in Poetry for 147 CONSECUTIVE days beginning December 4, 2016

I really like this poem! I write poems as well. I have written two, but I think this one beats both. Keep writing!
Elverconny Elverconny 6 days ago
I'm sorry I loved this poem...but do you think theirs a chance any of you could check out my poem and tell people?just search up elverconny and you'll see
What makes the poem beautiful is the painting you give with your words. Like my favorite quotes says, "Writing is the painting of the voice," that's the perfect example of that.
nacarra nacarra Apr 23
Cleaver wording! I love it, it's not to sappy and not to lovey dovey
Love thiss!!! I would love it if u give me your opinion about my poems!!! :))(
CameronCalloway CameronCalloway Dec 31, 2016
I think your message is beautiful and the first stanza is well done.
                              The secind stanza, tho, could use a little work. Maybe try using near rhymes instead if exact rhymes so it sounds more natural?