My Guardian Angel

My Guardian Angel

3 Part Story 1.3K Reads 31 Votes
Skiddles By Skiddles Updated Dec 17, 2011

From the beginning of your existence God has given you a Guardian Angel to care for you, to watch over you and to help you, but not all Guardian Angels and an Angel yet, you're best friend may be your Guardian Angel, you never really know, or do you?

xmakeachange22 xmakeachange22 Dec 24, 2011 02:49AM
first off I love the pun in chapter won! I'm a sucker for puns :) also AWESOME STORY! i love chapter won ;)
scarhead107 scarhead107 Dec 21, 2011 09:33PM
wow! you have a really great idea! this is a really good story and you are really talented
malin87 malin87 Dec 21, 2011 09:31PM
This is an amazing first chapter! It captured me right away and I love that it is written in a boy's POV.
NateVickers NateVickers Dec 21, 2011 02:56AM
I like this however I do have a problem: 
                              
                              1. The description wasn't all that good.   
                              
                              Good grammar and punctuation 
                              
                              7/10 :)
jessiemh_ jessiemh_ Dec 21, 2011 02:48AM
Hey! this is really creative you have some run on sentences but it's okay that can be easily edited :)
xXAbbyDawnXx xXAbbyDawnXx Dec 21, 2011 02:41AM
Your first sentence was a little bit long... and why does the nurse automatically assume it's heart cancer? :/
                              I like the story though!! Keep writing. ^.^