this is the story o vancha march from the fatefull day to the end enjoy please comment and vote and fan please
It awesome you should put more👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍!!!!!
This was a very good chapter. Despite the grammar. It's ok though because vampires aren't very into grammar and stuff which really makes the story more interesting. Like you have the whole character's Point of view! I hope to read more soon!
This would be a good story but when I are u going to get Evanna envolved? She was the one who raised Vancha you should include her
Great premise but watch your wording and mannerism. If the story is set over 100 year ago terme like "stupid bear" would not have been used.i enjoyed reading this but felt pulled out of the story when these little things came up. Don't give up you have
bad news im afraid i decided that as no one is giving me any feedback im putting it on the shelf for now if you would like more please comment and tell me and tell me what you would like to happen in vanchas world
i am writing another part today and will have it on here as soon as i have finished it please fan me and vote thanks for your support