Bruised Knuckles (#Wattys2016)

Bruised Knuckles (#Wattys2016)

39.2K Reads 3.3K Votes 40 Part Story
august By augtwy Completed

[boyxboy] [#143 in teen fiction] [completed]                                                    His parents are drug addicts and alcoholics.
His brother is in a gang.
His sister doesn't talk much.
He plays baseball and knows how to stand up for himself. 
What's one more thing added to the list going to do? A lot. 

Orion is gay, and that one little uncontrollable identity pushes him over the edge, when it should set him free.
(This story will involve drugs, alcohol, and other similar themes)
- cover thanks to @-normality

alpha_the_untamed_ alpha_the_untamed_ Dec 28, 2016
Ok like if this was a real game in real life it would have been a big out fight. Trust me I know.
allycatdaone15 allycatdaone15 Oct 21, 2016
Don't you--
                              
                              Don't you dare end this chapter with a line like that--
                              
                              How dare you?! 👏😥
BookThief00 BookThief00 Nov 16, 2016
I loved the beginning! Great attention getter. I also love the brief explanation of his family life, I normally like the suspense of not knowing but you really make it work. Awesome chapter overall!
_symphonic_ _symphonic_ Nov 16, 2016
Ah sorry my tablet kept freezing when i tried to comment and i guess it did post a comment after all. 
                              
                              I just wanted to say that this was an amazing, powerful first chapter. Especially  the last line. I can't wait to continue reading.
RileyKifer RileyKifer Nov 05, 2016
This is a good start. The writing is very clean, and well polished. And the description is great.