Looks can kill

Looks can kill

318 Reads 8 Votes 3 Part Story
Dawn By monsterunderthebed21 Updated Dec 21, 2010

Beth has moved schools and changed everything about herself, determined not to let history repeat itself again. But when Jake interrupts his way into her life, will all of that change? will all of the work that Beth has done be for nothing?

monsterunderthebed21 monsterunderthebed21 Dec 05, 2010
im gonna do that right now. By the way, sorry i never updated when i said i would. i dont have lots of time, but im updating it right now.
Jellyphish Jellyphish Dec 05, 2010
I like it alot! The only suggestion I have is that you work on your capitalization :)
monsterunderthebed21 monsterunderthebed21 Dec 02, 2010
thanks! i;m posting some more tonight. i love to write. i do it in classes and my teachers think i'm taking notes. 
roohidevgan roohidevgan Dec 01, 2010
Omg I totally love it :D.. Its soo cool :) U have got to update soon. I think I like beth's character!