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Willows Weight Loss Camp, aka, Fat Camp

Willows Weight Loss Camp, aka, Fat Camp

9.7K Reads 181 Votes 5 Part Story
carrotcake1447 By carrotcake1447 Updated Dec 16, 2010

This is an ongoing story about a 14-year old girl named Cassidy, whose parents are sending her to Fat Camp for the summer. She refuses to go because she doesn't want to be further embarrased about her weight, and what better way to be embarrased than to be sent to a Fat Camp for the rest of the summer? It's a humorous story with various segments on Cassidy's Fat Camp adventures.

- - Aug 31, 2014
I've always wanted to go to a fat camp. Fat people are so nice
OpheliaSchmit OpheliaSchmit Aug 05, 2014
It's a decent story. Personally, not my kind of story I like to read, but it's not bad at all. I liked the way you wrote "my mother purred softly, like a gentle breeze blowing against the bare branches of a tree". It's pretty imagery, and something new to hear.
carrotcake1447 carrotcake1447 Nov 27, 2010
@TheEnglishNerd thank you so much! you really made my day. =)
TheEnglishNerd TheEnglishNerd Nov 27, 2010
wow! Holy Smokes your a amazing writer! Very detialed and thorough with your words, I love that. Please contiue and I'm eagerly awaiting to what happens next! *Voted and Fanned!*