Black Water (First Version)

Black Water (First Version)

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Eirinn By Ezmeralde Completed

Where can I begin to explain how my senior year at my high school turned into a full blown war?
I’m Alison Lowerly. Call me Ali; I'm a 17 Year old water elemental. That someone who wields water for those of you who don’t know, my best friend is a vampire and the head teacher is a shape shifter. It's the norm for someone not to turn up to class on a full moon. But what is not normal is Sprit wielders, There were either elementals or vampires who choose to kill and drink human blood in order to be able to control all the elements and become immortal, they're supposed to be extinct, at least thats what i thought. Until one showed up at my school.

Mystery245 Mystery245 Feb 12, 2014
Don't feel bad same here I'm writing . My first book long chapters in my handwriting but always so short here too
crazi_horse_lover crazi_horse_lover Jan 23, 2014
Omg, I don't care at all about the grammar or anything else that you say is bad. THIS IS AMAZING!!!
VintAija VintAija Oct 25, 2012
I like how you describe each character. Looking forward to your next updates.
Wolfmoongirl Wolfmoongirl Dec 31, 2011
Oh, one more thing, I like how you used Hayden P. for Paige. 
                              Paige is my name! And I like Hayden! :)
TakiraMaine TakiraMaine Dec 05, 2011
Great book so far but one thing I suggest that you don't put the same word on one line more than once try to use a synonym for the word other than that your great and go to go