18+ please don't read if your not above these ages
Unless you want to really read this than go ahead
wtf.......... ? um could you checking the story for mistakes at least spellings and sentences not making sence
Good writing, but the grammar and spelling could use a lot of work. Good otherwise!
This story really left me in tears, it really tugged at my heartstrings but please part twenty eight
I can't even read this story because the FUCKUNG typing sucks
use English the write way or re-read your work before posting it
Well I can't wait until what happens next and the grammar with spelling needs work but it funny at the same time x