A Stumble in the Right Direction

A Stumble in the Right Direction

4.2K Reads 63 Votes 5 Part Story
hannahbags By hannahbags Completed

Emma is maddily in love with Mick Anderson. There has never been any indication that Mick was intrested in Emma. However after Emma stumbles to the ground on the way to class, Mick is there to save the day. There's been grazed knees, chicken poo manure and more. However Mick and Emma discover that these stumbles will lead them in the right direction.

AbbieeStarr AbbieeStarr May 26, 2013
Just a little tip: I'd put Pepper with a capital P since it's a name:')
AbbieeStarr AbbieeStarr May 26, 2013
Heey!:)
                              This is cute so far:) Only thing is at the start you said "Isn't Mike" but used Mick the rest of the chapter, unless they're two different characters they fair enough:')
PeppermintCandies PeppermintCandies Jan 06, 2012
cute ^_^ ya think u might read my story? if not thats ok i fanned u :)
leavesrloony leavesrloony Dec 11, 2010
Oh and the image also at the start of part 2 should be imagine. Just trying to help you out :D
leavesrloony leavesrloony Dec 11, 2010
I liked your story but I think there's supposed to be a 'ate' added to that passion at the start of your story-part 2. Just to let you know :)
MrsReadalot MrsReadalot Dec 07, 2010
@KalMoss I agree, that line was pretty awesome-loved the dog and chickenpoo thing :P