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What They Created

What They Created

587K Reads 40.4K Votes 49 Part Story
AmaLYN By lynRogers15 Completed

They created him, they thought they could control him,but turns out she's the only one who can.




"I warned you , human. I said I would cooperate as long as she was unharmed. "

"Y-you don't have a choice." The Doctor gasped, continuing to take little steps back. The soldiers stepped around me, ready to defend their boss.  But looking at Silas.  
I doubt they could.  

An air of power seemed to flow through Silas. It was impossible not to feel it. 

The Doctor snapped his fingers and in a second a soldier had me by the throat.  I gasped in pain as he squeezed.

"Step back or she dies."  

Silas growled ,  and with the flick of his wrist the solider was across the room with his neck in Silas hand.  I gasped as Silas crushed the mans throat like he had threatened to do to me. 

"Stay away from her.  Here's the deal you touch her, you die.  It's simple really." 




Evie Welch is from a broken family.  Her parents divorced, her mother dead and her Father an uncaring bastard. Needless to say her life wasn't the greatest. But she held on.  She thought things would turn around when got an internship at her father's company.  There she meets an experiment named Silas.  Her life will never be the same. But that's a good thing...right?

Cover by @spheggs

KeepStayingWeird KeepStayingWeird 6 days ago
Hey! So this story seems great so far but quick tip? The transition between these sentences is seriously off putting. and a lot of this information is being told to us instead of being explained. Just something to consider. 
                              
                              Happy writing! I can't wait to read more!
What. Do. I. Think? WHAT DO I THINK? OH NO NO NO! IT'S WHAT I KNOW! AND WHAT I KNOW IS THAT SO FAR. THIS. IS. FREAKING. AWESOME. 😂👌👌👌😂😂😂👌😂😂👌👌
DamonKiss DamonKiss 7 days ago
The only thing that's superb is my as$!!! Tell him go screw himself you excuse of a father 😡✊
WhiteCigars WhiteCigars 7 days ago
I got braces and it prevents me from really biting down. Also there's always cleaning your undernail
jaxontrey jaxontrey 5 days ago
So far I'm loving it. I love your wording & the way you place your sentences.
PiyaPlays PiyaPlays 3 days ago
I love it, but there are several grammar errors that make some points unclear, and others hard to follow. Great story, though!