The Lies Of Jonathan Harper... And The Way He Failed. The title should make sense eventually. Big shout out to makedamnsure for the awesome cover!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@AnnieGil Thanks, but this will never be uploaded again...I might as well tell you the secret twist.
Zoey is split into 4: Jonie Tony Melonie and Suvy are all Zoey. That's why their names rhyme, but yeah, its an awful story line :)
@xxultravioletxx ya v confusing
and i realsy dont mind!, thanksy for reading
This is such a suspenseful intro and a great hook! Luv it! <3
@rockmysocks Thankyou, and yes, John and Master have many dreams...but are they true?
well written with an edge of mystery to it. good job, voted! :)
@charliees Thanks! Comments make my day and if everyone did I'd be over the moon!