Spellbound Sword

A Wattpad Featured Story, Highest Rank: #3 in Adventure!
    
    Synopsis:
    Travis was an orphan living in Mercy Square, until a magic-using outlaw named Kane Verdalea swooped in and carried him off on a whirlwind adventure. Travis discovers that he has a magical connection to a golden sword that once belonged to his family, a sword that is destined to protect him from a legion of knights who wish to eradicate magic and all those who use it. Along the way Travis meets a street-smart blade-wielding girl named Eris, a beast with the head of a deer and the body of a man, and a Princess more obsessed with building machines than wearing dresses. Together with his friends, Travis sets out to uncover his family's connection to the dark mysteries of the Kingdom. 
    
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Hey guys go check out @AyaneMiharu she doesn't have that many followers yet but she's a really talented writer and a close friend of mine.. help her out!

I like the book it kind of takes too long to get into the action

So are they in a city? Or a town, that is reliant on one man's supplies to it?

Ah! I don't like this man..what's his problem actually!  (¤_¤)

"Remorse("?), he called, but remorse his.........I'm assuming typo?

Maybe a descriptive sentence after "Hilde would remind them about" - a snippet of his reminder, or some strange Hilde-type comment on Jarters?