Loved by Brothers. (On Hold, Rewriting. )

Loved by Brothers. (On Hold, Rewriting. )

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Bri Saucier By bri_music16 Updated Nov 11, 2015

Christian moved my hair out of the way and started to lightly kiss my neck. Then I felt more lips on my neck...Aiden. I moaned and my breath started to get quick. I was panting with need. Then I felt Their hands slid up under my shirt...
Vivian Grey is an average teenage girl that just wants to be loved. When she meets these two brothers she falls in love with them. How can you pick between two guys that you love and love you back? She just wants both. What would happen if they leave town? Can she really leave her family and friends for them? What are the dark secrets that these brothers are hiding? Please read and find out!

  • action
  • aiden
  • brothers
  • christian
  • drama
  • love
  • loved
  • lovedbybrothers
  • romance
  • secrets
  • vivian
cs1as2 cs1as2 Apr 22
Very good! Keep bringing the fast updates!!! BTW, Vivian is one of my favorite names!! Great choice!!
                              ~A.C. Smith ~🍀
Interesting story line definitely but it needs a lot of spell and grammar check. There also needs a few cuts and add-ons here and there.
WinningStream WinningStream Jun 06, 2016
I really like this so far!  But there are quite a few errors through this chapter.  Just wanted to give a friendly heads up! :) :)
wannabeloved3 wannabeloved3 Jul 17, 2013
It's a pretty good start. Just a word of advice add more details. I know in my stories i could add more details as well, but it makes it more interesting. Ok on to the next chapter!