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The Panther | Book One (#Wattys2016)

The Panther | Book One (#Wattys2016)

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Elide Stark By elidestark Updated 2 days ago


It is recommended that you read "Legendary" instead of The Panther, considering the former is a heavily edited alternate version of this book. You can find it on my profile!


No one is who they seem. And not everyone will survive the lies...
  After Katherine's mother was brutally murdered in front of her own eyes, she swore that she'd avenge her death.
  That was the original plan, until the Black Twins showed up.
  Damon and Dawson Black are nothing but trouble, and she told them so. But Damon can't help but be intrigued by her.
  Little did he know, his interest would be revealing a lot of secrets.
  ♦Inspired by Throne of Glass, A Court of Thorns and Roses and Lux♦
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--Tas-- --Tas-- Jun 30, 2016
This is awesome. Like seriously bruh! Great start! I'm loving it ;)
MissMysteryGame MissMysteryGame Jun 27, 2016
For dialogue, always commas after the words in quotes. :) or else a ! or ?
theoceansblues theoceansblues Jun 19, 2016
Okay, this is good. My only thing though, is that you should stick to either 1st or 3rd person. I got very confused when you switch, thought you brought in another mother lol. But I'm going to keep read!
Brooke_Writer Brooke_Writer Jun 23, 2016
Great chapter! I'm really hooked already, although I feel like the tenses at places were a bit weak. Other than that, terrific set-up for your story!
leisestone leisestone Apr 17, 2016
Oh got her mother's death was heartbreakingly sad ):
                              Very well written but I'd make to paragraphs shorter so it's easier to read!
HarryPotterFreak777 HarryPotterFreak777 Jun 12, 2016
The poor girl! But what made those armed adults should frightened?