Ten Universes: The Night of the Wolf

Ten Universes: The Night of the Wolf

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Erin By Iskosia Updated Dec 01, 2010

In a world so very different from ours there is a prophecy, a prophecy that affects the future of every world including ours. The future of the Tenth-Verse (or cosmos) is in the hands of five eighteen year old girls and their life partners: five massive wolves. They, along with their brothers and a mysterious stranger named Storm, fight to free their world and ours from the clutches of the demon queen Blue Aries. But first they need to wait for the Night of Wolf or their mission is doomed...

miley246 miley246 Dec 09, 2010
Its really nice. Upload soon and you'll get more comments,trust me.
Iskosia Iskosia Dec 09, 2010
I'm not exactly sure what you mean but that. When I click on the story the paragraphs are lined up on the left-hand side. How does it appear to you?
miley246 miley246 Dec 09, 2010
Its really captivating though I am sure what shies away readers is your format of arrangement. If maybe you space it better and align your paragraphs keenly, I'll bet my next pay check that you'll get a steady pair of reads.