"Abduction" A 1D Vampire Love Story

"Abduction" A 1D Vampire Love Story

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Sahar Kandi By SaharKandi Completed

One young girl named Sahar Kandi, gets invited to a birthday party far away from her, her car runs out of gas in the middle of a dark and stormy night. She can barely see anything. Her phone has no service so she has no where to go. Suddenly 5 sexy vampires sneak up on her. What will they do to her? What will her friends say? Will they go looking for her and get caught too? Keep reading to find out!! ;)  BTW, The cover of this book belongs to nightmaregirl18!! NOT ME!! She let me keep it, SO I HAVE PERMISSION TO HAVE IT!! This is the link to her story: http://www.wattpad.com/story/4240947-the-boys-they-faked-to-be

whorecruxes whorecruxes Feb 15, 2015
it kind of switches between tenses (I walk to the store, then I looked at the bush--example).  Actually, if the girl falls in love with all of them, I think that's Stockholm syndrome. I think your story is pretty good, though, aside from some grammatical errors. But yeah.
bubbles339 bubbles339 Jul 18, 2014
THIS IS LIKE TEAM EDWASRD, THE MOST SEXIEST BOYBAND ALIVE, AND KIDNAPPING ALL INTO ONE!!!!!!!!!  LOVE IT!!!!!!!! :)
whats_a_book whats_a_book Jan 17, 2014
Continue!!!! But I don't have to worry because you already continued. 
Bravelikeasoldier Bravelikeasoldier Jul 22, 2013
Omg love it!! And don't hate me but zayns my favorite haha. But I kinda like Lou too
SaharKandi SaharKandi Jul 19, 2013
@SummerSessions That means sooooo much!! :D Thanks Summer! <3
SaharKandi SaharKandi Jul 18, 2013
@Demi3993 Thanks!! :D I didn't even notice they were doing that.. Lol