nothing but trouble || h.s.

nothing but trouble || h.s.

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allison autumn By allisonautumn_ Completed

"the bad kids and the good kids and all kids... they're just people, who deserve to be cared for."

- john green

allisonautumn_ allisonautumn_ Apr 28, 2014
@sincerelykaycee awwww Thanks so much babe it means soooo much ♡♡♡
octoberluke octoberluke Apr 28, 2014
everything is just so detailed, I can literally picture everything inside of my head; this is perfect♥
octoberluke octoberluke Apr 28, 2014
You are such an amazing writer, the description itself had me so excited to read it♥
xXxBroken_DreamerxXx xXxBroken_DreamerxXx Dec 25, 2013
It's really lacking descriptions and emotions. I can't really picture anything in my head at this point. You should go back and try adding some details to your paragraphs. The dialogue was great! I just wish there was more to it :/ Good luck xx