Boruto And Sarada Back In Time

Boruto And Sarada Back In Time

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Boruto looked around at a unfamiliar konoha. He began to freak out. "Where the hell am I!" He turned to his left to see sarada by his side and his right a random stranger. He was staring at the stranger like he knew him but couldnt quite put his finger on it. The person had a black and orange jumpsuit with a uzumaki clan symbol on the back he also had yellow hair and blue eyes like his. That's when he realized it was his father. (This book is dedicated to Loru321 thank you for all your kindness, I will do my best and make this book the best book of all time!)

I know you've already heard it, but watch were you put the suffixes. (Ahhh I feel terrible, I hate correcting people)
Again! Why is there a "sama"? 
                              
                              
                              
                              Sama means "lord" or "lady"!
                              
                              
                              Like tsunade-sama! (Lady tsunade) or hokage-sama! (Lady/ lord hokage!)
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              Why -the heck- is he calling his own son "lord" Boruto!?
Loru321 Loru321 Apr 17
I think this is a good start for your first chapter! I'll happily give advice for future chapters!
Um, ok I hate correcting people, I really do, but when Naruto was 14 he was training with Jiraiya. They would be 12-13.
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IfYouWereGay IfYouWereGay 7 days ago
I love how Burrito calls himself Boruto-san. (I meant to call him burrito)