Loving You is Killing Me

Loving You is Killing Me

22.2K Reads 302 Votes 30 Part Story
Jeanett By jeanettwagley Updated Aug 27, 2011

This is the story of Elizabeth Ann Leighton. She found love and believes her life is perfect. What she should know is that nothing is ever what it seems.

x0XjamieeX0x x0XjamieeX0x Jan 23, 2011
@jeanettwagley Cool, message me if you make changes, and I'll read it again !
                              
                              -jamiee
                              :D
jeanettwagley jeanettwagley Jan 23, 2011
@x0XjamieeX0x  Yep, I get what you mean.. :) I'll try working on it, I like the suggestion.
jeanettwagley jeanettwagley Jan 22, 2011
@x0XjamieeX0x thank you (:
                              I agree that it probably should be longer, it's just that I don't want to give too much away. Any suggestions on what I should add?
x0XjamieeX0x x0XjamieeX0x Jan 22, 2011
So... This is an attention grabbing start. My only suggestion is to maybe make it a bit longer- not too long because it is the first part. I like part about winter. Leaves you wondering who those people are. Its good.
                              
                              -jamiee
                              :D
muuffiin muuffiin Dec 01, 2010
i like the title :) hahahaha it's better than frosty madness