This is the story of Elizabeth Ann Leighton. She found love and believes her life is perfect. What she should know is that nothing is ever what it seems.
@jeanettwagley Cool, message me if you make changes, and I'll read it again !
@x0XjamieeX0x Yep, I get what you mean.. :) I'll try working on it, I like the suggestion.
@x0XjamieeX0x thank you (:
I agree that it probably should be longer, it's just that I don't want to give too much away. Any suggestions on what I should add?
So... This is an attention grabbing start. My only suggestion is to maybe make it a bit longer- not too long because it is the first part. I like part about winter. Leaves you wondering who those people are. Its good.
i like the title :) hahahaha it's better than frosty madness