The Way You Make Me Feel

The Way You Make Me Feel

11.2K Reads 408 Votes 5 Part Story
TonyStark By TonyStark20 Completed

(Stony Steve/ Captain America x Tony Stark/IronMan boy on boy don't like DONT read! Characters are not mine they belong to marvel! This is my first story so please bare with me I know it won't be good but what ever. With that said ENJOY!)

Tony has a very important question to ask pepper that is to marry him but he finds her cheating and leaves her. Tony hurts and is breaking and has no one to trust to help him or at least he thought. Steve wants to help his metal friend because he is worried he will kill him self so he trys. Will Tony trust him? Will Steve learn to like Tony? Can Tony be saved? Will love blossom? Find out in The Way You Make Me Feel!

  • avengers
  • blackwidow
  • brucebanner
  • halkeye
  • hawkeye
  • steverogers
  • stony
  • thor
  • tonystark
I think she took the ring so she could sell it for some big cash
This song has got me through rough times. High school is a bitch
Just saying, I saw a lot of places you should have used commas and periods, sorry it just annoys me when there are run on sentences
Waterstripe Waterstripe Aug 08
The story is good, nothing against it, but commas and points would make it easier to understand, and also more interesting. It would be awesome if you rework it or let someone do that for you :)
I feel this is something I would say when someone walks into my room^^
Please edit your chapters! The spelling, grammar and punctuation errors are making this story hard to read! I love the plot, but please, please, please edit!!