Unormal Life

Unormal Life

5.3K Reads 120 Votes 14 Part Story
You probably already know By Dem-Vamp Updated Feb 23, 2012

Luna Nightingale is not like all the other nine year old girls. She is an experiment who has escaped the scientists that messed up her life. They used some kind of DNA to mix with hers that caused her hair and eyes to permanently turn white and is forced to wear a white dress.  When she escapes she meets A boy named David who is nothing like she thought he would be. Luna only has a short time before she is captured.

ContingencyCorp ContingencyCorp Oct 28, 2010
This is really good. Y do u say that ur stories arent good? <3
Dem-Vamp Dem-Vamp Oct 22, 2010
@favfantasy im probably going to upload each chapter on here
Dem-Vamp Dem-Vamp Oct 22, 2010
@watty88 thnk u & its hard 2 look 4 spelling and grammar errors wen ur typing fast, plus idnt know alot about grammar. I'll try2do better
watty88 watty88 Oct 22, 2010
hey.. the story is really nice and so is t he pace at which its going:) but i think it needs editing.. spelling errors and grammatical errors... and sometimes it gets a casual tone to it.  for eg.. "walking arnd or anything" 
                              otherwise good stuff..!:)
                              
Dem-Vamp Dem-Vamp Oct 05, 2010
@favfantasy thnk you and if i get sum more good comments about it then i will post the first chapter 
Dem-Vamp Dem-Vamp Oct 05, 2010
@AquaGirl2damax  dnt worry about it, im really thankful for people who help me bc thats hw we gt bttr :)