The Snake in the Dark

The Snake in the Dark

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Alekei Lee Smith By AlekeiAngel Completed

Tom Riddle aka Lord Voldemort made plans during Draco's and Harry's 5th year of school give or take and now that he's mapped and remapped them out it's time to put them into action.
Is all going to go accoridingly?
Why is 'Both' Draco and Severus severly punished?
Who is the Hatchling, that Nigini attempts to Kill?
Is Harry or 'Hadrian' going to be stuck in his 'Animagi' form forever?
Does the so-called 'Dark Lord' truly have a heart and perhaps a 'Soul' to love a teenage boy whom he's been unitentionally facinated with for centeries?

EmmyBerge EmmyBerge Aug 12, 2016
That is the best nickname for dumbledore ive ever seen. "Albus Fuckaduck" 😂😂😂
Silvertrashbag01 Silvertrashbag01 Oct 12, 2016
Okay, this needs a lot of improvement, you really shouldn't switch povs so abruptly like that, and some of your spelling it off, but if you fix those things then it'd smooth out a lot and be much easier to read.
Silvertrashbag01 Silvertrashbag01 Oct 12, 2016
I didn't mean to be offensive, I was just trying to give you positive constructive criticism
EmmyBerge EmmyBerge Aug 12, 2016
I once wrote a fanfiction that nobody will ever read.... it said exactly that when I typed out the inheritance papers lol
Albus fuckaduck... I actually love that. It's really funny and great.