Aphmau is a new student at Phenix Drop High, she has no parents so she lives alone, she faces bullies and love. but no one knows her secret identity is the famous youtuber Aphmau what will happen when they find out?!
Why does Garroth call her Aphmau? She said her name was Jess, they don't now here names Aphmau.
You are an amazing writer, there's a few (ha ha the few! sutle reference) capitalization errors but other than that top notch. I admire how you know exactly were to put the commas , I still have trouble with that. Yo mind be bursting wit deh rainbowz of creativity!