Rejection kills

Rejection kills

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Hannah Jones By _Rose_Gold Completed

"No you're not!" he shouts "You'll live... You have to! You're my mate" 

"Yes I am and the sooner you get that through your head the easier it will be when I do go! You rejected me Mase and I know you didn't know what would happen but you still did. I pleaded you not to but you still did it"  it started out as a shout but it turned in to a whisper.  

What happens when you are rejected by your own mate? 
No one knows. Until now. 
My name is Emma Williams and this is the story of how I died

  • completed
  • death
  • friendship
  • kills
  • love
  • mate
  • rejection
pigzrule115 pigzrule115 May 10, 2017
Finally a girl who appreciates her looks 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
clickbait_ clickbait_ Sep 04, 2017
Meanwhile inside my head...
                              “Hey, it's Hannah. Hannah Baker”
dilucas4444 dilucas4444 Jan 24
I have a week and four days left. :(
                              I want to go to school, like, NOW
zoeewritesbooks zoeewritesbooks Sep 01, 2016
You really need to try to make this more interesting because you have literally nothing to draw the reader in. You just list your characters and give a ton of info, and people won't remember this. There is also nothing interesting about it when there is no action or detail but just an info dump.
InTheSc3n3Crowd InTheSc3n3Crowd Jul 30, 2016
The amount of mispronunciations of the word Worcestershire will be immense.
Crimson-Cardinal Crimson-Cardinal Aug 12, 2016
This is really good! i like the tone you have sounded like a typical student in this xD maybe try for more description (more showing than telling)