Life Has Never Been Sweeter

Life Has Never Been Sweeter

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TheMrsWonka By TheMrsWonka Completed

Charlie Bucket was an ordinary boy with an ordinary family. He lived with his two loving parents, 4 amazing grandparents, and an awesome, caring sister. His sister, Elena Bucket worked at a Candy Shop, selling Candies and bars invented by her Idol, Willy Wonka! One day, Charlie walked his sister to her job, when they stumbled across a Wonka poster, announcing he would guide 5 luck children around his factory. And one of those five children would receive a special prize at the end. When all hope seemed to be lost for Charlie ever getting a Golden Ticket, he found the last one on the last day! Being allowed one family member, Charlie chose his sister, who longed to see the factory inside and meet her idol. Would she find more than chocolate and pleasure? Would Willy Wonka find more than a child?Read!

Quick word of advice. You have a tiny mix of first point of view and third point of view.  (Example you said I wish she...  Is that she referring to herself?)
TheMrsWonka TheMrsWonka Apr 13
Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter! Sorry it was sinking but I hope you enjoyed it! I can't wait to publish the next chapter!