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Beautiful Disaster (Ongoing & on Hiatus)

Beautiful Disaster (Ongoing & on Hiatus)

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I live to write; I write to live. By NocturnalScribe Updated Feb 24, 2013

Ever since her mother died, Natalie has been the glue that desperately tries to keep the remains of her broken family intact.  And when Caleb, her older melancholic brother,  runs away from home, she comes to a moot point in her life---go after him with the risk of never being able to return home, or remain with her delusional father who has plans on remarrying a country bumpkin half his age.

Resorting to extremes, Natalie finds herself embarking on a musical journey towards friendship, love, healing and forgiveness.

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XxcrypticXcodexX XxcrypticXcodexX Dec 25, 2012
Wait, so Natalie's mom's hair is supposed to be straight and black, right? But the woman you use to play her is blonde. I googled pictures of the Leann Rhymes girl.
ColorfulQuirks ColorfulQuirks Apr 20, 2011
Really good so far. I feel really bad for Natalie and Caleb. There's a lot of emotion in this story, and not many errors. Great job with this story, it has loads of potential.
Anni_innA Anni_innA Apr 15, 2011
it's really good! i feel so bad for the siblings too :( btw i love alex evans! :)) keep writing!
everwise everwise Apr 14, 2011
The story title is catchy, I like it. The start of you story is good too. It also really builds up the atmosphere and situation, also known as the setting. Voted!
fruitypoptart fruitypoptart Mar 02, 2011
Ahh, I love this so far! :) I think it's great! (Especially Sharmaine's language, I found that funny. :D) 
misty_moo misty_moo Jan 31, 2011
Wow your pretty amazing! The chapter is perfect in length so don't worry about that :) okay I'm going to stop commenting and continue reading this piece of awesomeness :D xx