The bat phantom

The bat phantom

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mysteri1425 By mysteri1425 Updated Jul 04

The life of him got worsen after all the events he went through when he such a child there. 2 years of he'll he gone and now he end up in this weird team. How will they react with this newly teammate.and a certain bat family claim on him to be one of them.but one thing they must know. They snatch him from the man. So. He will get Danny no matter what. Danny Phantom / Batman/ Young Justice.

  • batfamily
  • brucewayne
  • clockwork
  • damianwayne
  • dannyfenton
  • dickgrayson
  • ghostfamily
  • jasontodd
  • pandora
  • timdrake
  • youngjustice
One paragraph in and I'm already itching to rewrite this to filter out the spelling and grammatical errors. And I'm dyslectic. I'm liking the rest of it though.
She sighed, "why is this world so cruel?" she asked herself while closing the mirror.
Why does he cry if she hurts him when he doesn't feel any pain?
APokeMa APokeMa Jul 05
I can understand the real sentence, but the poor writing is killing me.
I like the story and the idea very much, but your grammar really must become better. Sometimes I don't understand what they're doing or saying.
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