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The bat phantom

The bat phantom

27.3K Reads 917 Votes 18 Part Story
mysteri1425 By mysteri1425 Updated 4 days ago

The life of him got worsen after all the events he went through when he such a child there. 2 years of he'll he gone and now he end up in this weird team. How will they react with this newly teammate.and a certain bat family claim on him to be one of them.but one thing they must know. They snatch him from the man. So. He will get Danny no matter what. Danny Phantom / Batman/ Young Justice.

One paragraph in and I'm already itching to rewrite this to filter out the spelling and grammatical errors. And I'm dyslectic. I'm liking the rest of it though.
She sighed, "why is this world so cruel?" she asked herself while closing the mirror.
I like the story and the idea very much, but your grammar really must become better. Sometimes I don't understand what they're doing or saying.
SirDaSir SirDaSir May 19
Wait..... Why would they order doctors? Now the public know where the YJ base is....
I'm gonna get so confused in this book ughhhhh..... 
                              BUT I'll still read it!
DestineySlagle DestineySlagle Dec 21, 2016
Oh  my gosh the way you speak sounds like hulk, but worse 0_o