Broken Until Him [On Hold]

Broken Until Him [On Hold]

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Mailee Horthen By jxstmysxlf Updated Sep 03

Seventeen year-old Jade Levinson lives in her own shattered and lonely world where she tends to forget herself. She, above all the people, knows what sadness is because of the wrench inside of her tearing her apart every single second. 

Since that day which smashed the hope of having a happy life, she refuses to become attached to somebody. But she discovers that she's not the only one who has a heart made of broken pieces.

When a mysterious and determined boy who somewhat manages to read her like an open book crosses her path, she can only be honest with him and begins to reveal pieces of an indelible past she would have rather forgot about.

Between lies and dark secrets, she is only sure about one thing : nobody has ever cared for her that way, until him.

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You are totally right. Don't let this people take you down!! All of your readers (us) will support you no matter what. If I see there's another story that look like yours, I'll tell you and even warn the author of that story. Keep writing, your story is amazing ❤
It's a short first chapter so there isn't much I can say about it but it's a great start and I love how genuine it sounds. I can honestly relate to a lot of this but not sure if that's good haha 😂 Just wanted to tell you I'm french too (half)! So that makes two of us 😊
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This story is off to a great start. Reading the character trying to address the diary is a struggle we, the people who have diaries, struggle and it opens up about the reason she started a diary which is good. As far as I'm concerned, there's no mistakes or errors in this chapter so you're good.
EmoPersons EmoPersons Jun 30
I love your book do what Selena Gomez sats " kill em' with kindness "
Sarah_Adel2 Sarah_Adel2 Oct 10
Nice start. I liked your description a lot. The way you showed her feelings was more than awesome. Good job with that. The prologue made me so interested to read the book.