Assassinate

Assassinate

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Katie Allsop By KatieAllsop Completed

Before my saviour found me, the life I had lived was awful. My parents were outrageously rich and didn't want me. I was chucked out onto the streets before the age of five. Some people may try to say that I was too young to understand, or that my age defined my maturity. Maybe I was too young to understand, my previous life had been messy and unclear. You know how they say it's a cruel world out there? I never used to believe it or maybe I just didn't understand it. But I certainly do now. 


(Slowly being edited/rewritten. No major changes)

BLPxxx BLPxxx Dec 28, 2016
Can you maybe warn people if theres going to be vampires in this book before-? 😐
LetaHallmark LetaHallmark Oct 29, 2016
That's right!!!! You tell em, girl!!!
                              Btw, I will only comment at the character's stupid action. Not your writing skills!
TiaVarnado6 TiaVarnado6 Dec 18, 2016
How can you be lifeless and still alive? I know what you meant but your word choice was poor.
ekemem ekemem Jan 20, 2016
Very Sad story.... Wonder why people have kids and just throw them out like a garbage?
                              Stupid parents....
readingaddiction123 readingaddiction123 Jan 09, 2016
If she's seventy eight years old how is her brother still a teenager and her parents still alive? :))
JulesXFuq JulesXFuq Dec 25, 2015
This Chapter is Amazing-ly written, Beautifully structured and has an intriguing story line. 👍