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Mr.Bad Boy And Me

Mr.Bad Boy And Me

156K Reads 5.5K Votes 35 Part Story
Anosha By anosha2627 Updated 5 days ago

#63 in TeenFiction. 02/10/16

  Ariana Lockwood is a Sweet, sarcastic, funny, sassy two goody shoes. She doesn't drink or smoke and doesn't go to high school parties. She has the best grades in Beacon Hills High School.
    Xavier Knight is a cocky, arrogant bad boy. He goes to high school parties, drinks and he even smokes. He use girls like tissue paper and has fucked every girl in bacon hills except Ariana and her best friend. Girls fall head over heels in love with him but he never cared.
    So what happens when Ariana and Xavier meet each other?Will they fall in love or hate each other forever? I guess you just have to read to find out.....
*Warning*: Mature language has been used in this story so read at your own risk...

    Cover by @ATWisBOSS

leahstars8 leahstars8 Jul 04
I agree with Lunarian on this one, make sure to add "I" in between then and realized and "the" in between that and my
leahstars8 leahstars8 Jul 04
To simplify the fourth sentence I would say: "Austin and I have one thing in common: our eyes are big and blue"
                              Remember to put the word "a" in the sixth sentence between the words have and flat.
I think the school should be based on lunch😂 what we get to learn about food
leahstars8 leahstars8 Jul 04
Take out the comma and replace it with "and". Also take out the word "of".
leahstars8 leahstars8 Jul 04
Don't forget the closing quotation mark after the question mark.
Um bro relax will ya, or do you want ME to throw a rock at you