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Those Green Eye's

Those Green Eye's

2.3K Reads 20 Votes 11 Part Story
Rebecca By DoritoNinja Updated Aug 15, 2011

Lila Everstien was kidnapped when she was 12 and she finally escaped four years later.  With the help of Harvey Cook she regains her health and embarks to try and find her family.  Harvey gives her shelter and hopes that Lila will be happy once again.  But he has a dark family secret that he is barley hidding from Lila.  Will she figure it out?  Will she find her real family?  Is her real family still looking for her?  So many questions and only reading can give the answers.

xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Dec 02, 2010
wow! keep it up, a few errors but nothing too bad!
                              also, could u check out my story if u have the chance
ZimBob ZimBob Dec 01, 2010
Gosh this was really good!
                              I really want to read more!
                              Keep it up!
DoritoNinja DoritoNinja Nov 30, 2010
@Blissful_Monster thanks for the feedback.  Sorry bout the grammer i'm not the best in the world. :(
Blissful_Monster Blissful_Monster Nov 29, 2010
 I really like the story but be sure to go back and check your grammar errors. It really takes away from the story. Your sentences run on a bit, but over all I really like this story :)