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Empty as my Heart

Empty as my Heart

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Mae By Maegan-Danielle Updated Jun 02, 2011

I stared right into the Hunter's eyes, frozen and afraid.  Afraid for my life.  He just looked at me, calmly and robotically.  As if I were just another kill, nothing to worry about.  Not a threat to him..or his friend.  The raid poured down hard, making the trees darken even more.  It didn't take me long to find my feet, to make them move again.  But, this task was also robotic.  A reflex due to my empending death.  Because that's what it was.  Fear of death.  I knew I was about to die, that the crossbow was undoubtedly pointed straight at my back, about to fire.  But I still ran.

Salorino Salorino Jul 03, 2011
I agree with @lozzyloo22 It reminds me of The Hunger Games.  It's really good so far!
lozzyloo22 lozzyloo22 Jun 02, 2011
this is really good! its a bit like The Hunger Games!!! excellent!