Harry Potters Twin Book One

Harry Potters Twin Book One

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Miss Awesomeness By unicornsrule Completed

Join Nixie Potter, Hermione Granger, and Bonnie Heart as they go through their first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardy with Harry Potter and Ronald Weasley. She faces trolls, arrogant jerks, bludgers, cruel teachers and Voldemort himself, yet she still manages to keep a brave face. Seriously, who wouldn't want to read about a girl like this? *under editing*

SHE DOESNT DESERVE TO BE CALLED A MUDBLOOD BECAUSE SHE WILL BE SMARTER THAN YOU AND YOUR STUCK UP PURE BLOOD SLYTHERIN FRIENDS ANY DAY.....
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              I know they can't hear me....
I think we can all agree that unicorns are pretty amazing, lamacorns to, and cats are cool, but not as good as dogs. I think unicorns should be included more in the story but oh well, a girl can dream.😉
Kymma4 Kymma4 Nov 14
Everyone can use magic without a wand, in fact, the African Wizarding School is adept at it. They often don't use them
Kymma4 Kymma4 Nov 14
Why is she proud of the fact, she's never met her mum, I mean Harry was kinda proud of the fact but then he realised that his dad was a big prick and wasn't so proud of the fact anymore. So for all she knows Lily could have been the same way.
What about grammar? You've put 'your' instead of 'you're' somewhere.
LacyWillow LacyWillow Jun 17
Draco's favorite way to start a sentence: "My father says..."