when will i be

when will i be

4.7K Reads 675 Votes 43 Part Story
HeraBolivia By patotie19 Completed

Best friends. 2 words that crumples my heart and torn me to pieces just like that. A word that will destroy me. 

My life is in grave danger. Falling in love with you is a mistake. A dangerous decision that would cause me to death. Because on the first place, I am just a friend.

  • bestfriend
  • good
  • happyending
  • heartache
  • pain
  • sad
  • shits
  • worthit
lilyxgray lilyxgray May 20, 2016
Oh so they are childhood friends which is usually like. Nyek akala ko naman sila na ang magpartner. Hindi pala siya bakla dahil gusto niya Si Tiffany. Haha heart disease agad sabihin mo may gusto ka kay jayjay at nagseselos ka haha at Si manang napakagaling. (46)
DyosangEys DyosangEys May 22, 2016
Proper use of capitalization and punctuation na rin. Hahaha. Wag puro "!" atsaka spacing na rin.
lovingyoucrazy lovingyoucrazy Jun 04, 2016
 #OBC
                              nakakainis na tlga huh! Lagi na lang cheerleader ang nagugustuhan. cliche siya pero iyon tlga yun e. Ung mga taong pwede kang mainsecure. Sa mga taong gnun tlga. Like cheerleader, queen, sikat, etc
Aprilim1994 Aprilim1994 May 21, 2016
Um suggestion lang po otor...
                              Always capitalize the word "I" when it alone becoz we both know that this word stands for noun.. so it should be always capitalize.
lovingyoucrazy lovingyoucrazy Jun 04, 2016
 #OBC
                              ang ganda ng prologue mo. ramdam na ung feelings ng bida. Hmmm. Suggestion lang po. mas maganda sana po kung gnwa siyang parang letter.
missJENs missJENs Jun 07, 2016
Hmmm.. so ang story mo ay about friendzone. Hahah... kawawa naman. Haist ganyan talaga...