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Ely By Mr_Cape Updated Nov 28, 2010


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Great poem. The words are great and the sense of mystery's awesome. Keep it up.
CCMeeker CCMeeker Jan 23, 2011
This is a poem with which I can definitely identify. The emotions in this are described so vividly that it helps the reader to relate to it with his/her own experiences. Great work! 
kcal2010 kcal2010 Jan 05, 2011
I really think this is my favorite piece by you, its haunting but mesmerizing at the same time. 
darkflamezdeath darkflamezdeath Dec 20, 2010
coooooollioz. gooooooooooood work big bro. luvz ya deathyz. talkyz to moi. BYEYAZ! 
roselesbian roselesbian Dec 15, 2010
As I already said before, you're an awesome poet. This one is beautiful and good imagery too, with comparing the iffiness of man to the darkness of the universe. I love this. Gonna check out Lady In Black now. =D
Livin4God Livin4God Dec 06, 2010
i like specifically the last part of the poem and how you compared it to starlight. Your writing is really descriptive. Good work!