The New Teammate

The New Teammate

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Shanabuttercup By Shanabuttercup Completed

She was an assassin.
They were young heroes.

She was beaten for her mistakes.
They were treated with care and kindness.

They were heroes.
She was a villain. 

What happens when their paths meet?

  • new
  • superheros
  • youngjustice
Glasses-Sama Glasses-Sama Sep 12, 2017
It's got a good idea to it but it does need some work. Start out with putting spaces between paragraphs and stuff. Also, try to change the wording a bit to make it more interesting. That my advice for you but other wise the background and story plot behind the writing is very well thought out.
I dress like that most of the time but in stead of orange its black or white or both
Deadpool7337 Deadpool7337 Jul 30, 2017
I like it so far, I do have one peace of constructive criticism if you want to hear it?