The New Teammate

The New Teammate

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Shanabuttercup By Shanabuttercup Completed

She was an assassin and apprentice to Deathstroke

They were the protégés of the league 

She was beaten and punished for her mistakes

They were treated with love,care, and kindness

They are heroes

She is a villain or so they thought

She has is a warrior angel

What happens when the 2 paths meet read to find out more

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Glasses-Sama Glasses-Sama Sep 12, 2017
It's got a good idea to it but it does need some work. Start out with putting spaces between paragraphs and stuff. Also, try to change the wording a bit to make it more interesting. That my advice for you but other wise the background and story plot behind the writing is very well thought out.
I dress like that most of the time but in stead of orange its black or white or both
Deadpool7337 Deadpool7337 Jul 30, 2017
I like it so far, I do have one peace of constructive criticism if you want to hear it?