this stuff doesnt happen to me

this stuff doesnt happen to me

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summertime_kisses By summertime_kisses Updated Mar 19, 2011

Sophomore at an all girls school, Lila French is plain, average, ordinary, shy, and awkward. with brown hair, blue eyes, and the perfect curves, Lila is not ugly at all, but certainly is not one of the popular skanks. How will Eric ever even talk to her if she isnt a whore? will one summer kiss torture her for the rest of her highschool years? [[based off of the authors life]]

RaggedyBun RaggedyBun Dec 01, 2010
I think all you have to do, is fix your conventions (periods, new paragraphs, capitals, ect) It was hard for me to read with all the conventional mistakes, but I do get the overall story, and I think it is really interesting.
lucky97 lucky97 Nov 29, 2010
Awww:) I can c how the girl is so immature... U displayed her character so well... Great! 7/10