Their Soft Spot

Their Soft Spot

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owlhunter18 By owlhunter18 Updated Oct 03

Lilly was a sweet girl small and petite no way of defending her self and was very trusting with everybody. Lilly's parents were always away and never in her life leaving her to defend on her own she was a born submissive.

Kyle and Brandon on the other hand were  dominate and out grew full men at the age of 15 they we rich and very powerful  taking orders from no one and they had no soft spot excepted for her.

Nenerh1 Nenerh1 May 15
It sounds interesting, but can I suggest fixing the grammar mistakes? They are a bit confusing...
Love the story line the grammar needs major editing, I think that ba grammar makes the readers confused so it  would also get you more readers if you fixed the grammar pls
NovaLuna21 NovaLuna21 Sep 08
So far so good. However, like some of the other comments say, you really need to check your spelling and grammar before you post so that it is easier for your readers to follow. :)
They should be played by the Dolan twins 😍😍😍 
                              Just an opinion your story