Everlasting Destiny

Everlasting Destiny

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s h r e y a By idyllic-vellichor Updated Sep 04

Do you know the feeling where your entire world falls apart? And you have to start over? That's all she's ever been through. So when Alexia has to start again, she's determined to stay away. No attachments, no disappointment. But what happens when she meets a boy, enigmatic and emotionless? 
  A long journey of feelings as two hearts burn and crash. 
  
  ~~~ 
  
  "Didn't you ever want to give up?" 
  
  "No, because then I wouldn't have met someone like you."
  
  ~~~ 
  
  Where a boy and a girl find solace in each other, following their own course of destiny.
  
  [copyright © 2016 by Shreya Sridharan] 
  
  cover made by @serendiptically

idyllic-vellichor idyllic-vellichor Aug 01, 2016
Thank you! The cover is made by the lovely @serendiptically :)
ozthewild ozthewild Nov 20, 2016
This makes me think that my earlier assessment may have been too hasty. Maybe the protagonist isn't as pessimistic as I thought.
orchestrations orchestrations Aug 24, 2016
I love the beginning. It's well structured and well thought out. 🌠
_autumngirl_ _autumngirl_ Sep 10, 2016
This is beautiful...😱😱😱😱
                              It is so relative that it touched the core of my heart. I really didn't even paid any attention to anything else because it is so grasping. Very good...🌸
-hopeless-romantic -hopeless-romantic Oct 20, 2016
 #Ethereal
                              
                              Second person, huh? Nice.
                              
                              I can see the emotional anguish here. What you said is absolutely true. I like it that you mentioned love in every relationship.
                              
                              If you loose it once you'd be careful next time. It's how our human hearts work. 
                              
                              Keep writing. :)
Ethereal_Dreamers Ethereal_Dreamers Aug 09, 2016
 #ethereal
                              
                              Great prologue! It's not too long, good grammar, introduces the story, does what a prologue should do