Believing Again

Believing Again

4.4K Reads 160 Votes 10 Part Story
Brittneeeyyyy. ♥ By Britta Updated Aug 18, 2011

For the first nine years of Paige Branson's life she was neglected. Her brother had somehow dissapeared and her parents abandoned her and she was all alone. Now Pagie's life has just turned around but now she will face an unexpected decision which affects her future.

    sprittals98 sprittals98 Aug 18, 2011
    Who's eyes are those!! o.O I liked it! I've nevr heard of Gerberas... maybe because I don't really know flowers. All I know is daisy, tulip, and sunflower! Yupp, that's sad. But great book! Voted!
    realityxfantasy realityxfantasy Aug 18, 2011
    An interesting prologue, intriguing, but too short! I thought you should'e made it longer :) But, very nice start!
    robo12345 robo12345 Aug 18, 2011
    this is short but its really good, i love the way you describe the scenery! keep writing!
    perfectMistake perfectMistake Mar 21, 2011
    I love your use of imagery, I really like this. You're a great writer. 
    TKAnez TKAnez Mar 21, 2011
    This is short, but it's a good hook. I love your imagery, like the leaves dancing to the ground. Good job~
    Kirbyx Kirbyx Feb 24, 2011
    Haven't read quite enough to get me hooked yet. But I have a feeling it's going to be worth it :). Grammar is a great addition that differentiates yours from others. You obviously took the time to look over it carefully.