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But You're Mine (completed)

But You're Mine (completed)

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ouhh its nikki By nikkitho11 Updated Aug 26, 2016

"You've never kissed anyone have you?" I ask immediately wanting to take it back. Who even asks that? God, I'm such a bitch.

He stares at me. Then shakes his head, an ashamed look on his face. I wrap my hands around his neck and kiss him. He kisses back after four painful seconds of me awkwardly waiting for him to react. 

He keeps his hand on the small of my back and I smile. I smile while were kissing. Real smooth, Kamryn.

He pulls away. "Was it that bad?" He asks me looking worried as hell. "No. Not at all, Ian answer my question though," I tell him.

"I haven't. Well now I have...that was my first kiss."

"Good, because I would die right now if I knew another girl's lips touched yours."

Now my cheeks are red and he's looking at me like I'm crazy. Then he smiles and kisses my cheek, "You're real messed up Kam."
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Kamryn Allen, the most popular girl in school falls for the 'loser,' Ian Hansen. Will love overrule popularity, or will Kamryn protect her 'it girl' reputation?
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Myster_Fanta-C Myster_Fanta-C Apr 20, 2016
That moment when you realized that your attitude was bad to everyone and "don't care" until you see a good looking person.
BlindFlame730 BlindFlame730 May 01, 2016
I like the intro, it's really good.  There are some grammar errors, but really minor. Basically, it's good
Myster_Fanta-C Myster_Fanta-C Apr 20, 2016
This is great :D you certainly have potential to be an amazing author, there were slight grammar issues, and a little too much of telling instead of showing. But other than that, I enjoyed it a lot :D I'll be sure to recommend it to my friends :)
aash07 aash07 Jun 25, 2016
Ok for a change 
                              The popular girl and the looser guy 
                              No matter how many stories I have read all have bad boy good girl concept, this for a change is nice ♡
Myster_Fanta-C Myster_Fanta-C Apr 20, 2016
"Nothing much, I'm only gonna die.. No need to worry, carry on with your life. "
vogeler vogeler May 03, 2016
Read the summary :) 
                              You made it sound really interesting! Can't wait to start reading :D