Balance

Balance

42.1K Reads 1.4K Votes 43 Part Story
Hannah By helizabethr Completed

They say that one of the most important things in dance is balance. To have complete and utter control, but with Eliza, the only place that she can have balance in her life is through dance. Last she checked, she lived with her grandparents because her parents were in prison. Her life revolved around dancing and ignoring the people that annoyed her, which was practically everyone. No one understood why she was the way she was. So when she gets the chance to go to an academy for talented students far away from where she had lived for most of her life, of course she takes it. She's ready for a fresh start, but will she be able to keep her balance?

fantasyfann123 fantasyfann123 Apr 08, 2015
I love d beginning and it's easy to relate to the main character. U have done a really gr8 job!
SnickersChic SnickersChic Jan 25, 2014
This is amazing writing! The beginning is completely intriguing. The reader instantly feels like a part of your story and wants to continue reading. Your writing style flows very easily with what's going on, so it's just really smooth reading! Anyway, I like it.
GliceMonkey GliceMonkey Jul 03, 2013
This is great so far, and I like how it is original. It isn't like all the others. Thats cool.
Dementorskissed Dementorskissed May 15, 2013
This is really interesting, the dialogue is really good and interesting which keeps the story flowing well. You have a really good writing style and I love the way you just jump right into the plot! Keep writing
XoDreamsXo XoDreamsXo Apr 04, 2013
This is a great start to this story. It really gives a lot of information without telling the whole story. It gives the readers something to look forward to. It really seems like it will be an interesting read. Good job :)
helizabethr helizabethr Apr 04, 2013
@anthonykz @LAallday @Sampada_j Thank you guys for your feedback=)