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Netvor

Netvor

92.9K Reads 7.2K Votes 65 Part Story
RosesnWater By RosesnWater Updated 6 days ago

*Wattys2017*

      Avalon Capet, the youngest of three daughters, is a descendant of nobility and has been bred for the life of a lady ever since she was born. That is until her eleventh year, when her family is forced to leave France and escape to the forest village of Dusek.
        
      Her family adjusts to its new, penniless position in society, and Avalon struggles with both pain and loss, but almost never love. That is, until the dashing Noël Picoux, the successful and handsome son of her father's business partner, strides his way into her life. Unfortunately and unknowingly, he mistakes Avalon for her sister, Belle.
        
      However, life takes a deadly turn from scandalous to perilous when she finds out that after a financially disastrous venture, a contract was made between her father and a malevolent Faerie that binds the fate of their family to a single white rose.
      
      Avalon will soon find that the biggest antagonist she faces might just be the only person who can steal her heart.

JMRiddles JMRiddles 4 days ago
Hmmm. Don't mind me. I love guessing plot twists, but I suspect the prince wasn't really eaten and that the Netvor is not what it seems.
JMRiddles JMRiddles 4 days ago
I wonder what happened to the prince's siblings? If that is explained later, then it's fine. So far I enjoyed the first chapter and I didn't notice any major errors and I like that the backstory is delivered in fairytale.
ElizaLimaBean ElizaLimaBean 4 days ago
Overall, I think it's a really strong start. I am immediately drawn in and have a sense of what the rest of the story is going to be like, and you've got me just intrigued enough to want to keep reading. I like it!
jinaknez jinaknez Mar 14
Love the name. I'm Czech, so I actually understand it and I have to say it was a brilliant idea!!!!*♡*
JMRiddles JMRiddles 4 days ago
I'm not sure how one embroiders hair. I used to do embroidery. Perhaps you mean embraided?
ElizaLimaBean ElizaLimaBean 4 days ago
I really like this descriptive language! But, I feel like it would be a little more engaging if the descriptions of the faeries were coming directly from her mother, in the form of dialogue, as if the reader were hearing the stories too.