Rikkard And Lilly's Encounters

Rikkard And Lilly's Encounters

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This is a Storm and Silence fan fiction which will consist of mainly one shots.
ITEOTS one shots also included.

#StormandSilence
@LillyLinton
@RikkardAmbrose
All of the characters belong to the amazing @RobThier

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No need for more than one question mark or exclamation mark, Ambrose did not sound like himself, random paragraphs & terrible spacing, and made no sense, did not run smoothly
UJade4bts UJade4bts Aug 24
Wow you are spiffing. Its exactly just like the real novel.  And I think You are a BTS fan?
I feel like Lily wouldn't throw a fit and she would make him give her the day off instead of giving up so easily
Grammar Nazis unite! 
                              Ok so there are a few commas missing, Mr Ambrose doesn't sound like himself - you're almost there, but some fine tuning is required. 
                              Lilly is pretty good. 😊 
                              I didn't sugarcoat anything, ok? Just told u what I thought might be improved.
                              Because I'm a grammar nazi too.
WritersBlock4Dummies WritersBlock4Dummies Jun 28, 2016
One thing I REALLY noticed was that you changed the point of view halfway through. Great other than that!
Aille_Quartz Aille_Quartz Jun 06, 2016
Here are my editing suggestions:
                              No, It does not! - Don't put a capital letter on the word 'it'
                              
                              other than that, perf :)