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Not Yours

Not Yours

8K Reads 566 Votes 38 Part Story
GalexyGirl590 By GalexyGirl590 Completed

Vladimir Espinoza is a powerful ruthless business man with no mercy. He knows too well the cruel ways of this world and what people are capable of. Feared by everyone no one dares to defy him. He cares not what people think about him or what he does. All he truly wants is to find the one person who will love him for who he is and won't leave his side. That person can only be his mate. 
  Zane Dirk is a normal person but with a little craziness to him. Although he doesn't look like he is gay, he is and sure as hell proud of it. Being fresh out of high school he is ready to enjoy an awesome summer with his friends in Spain. However, things don't go as planned as things turn up for the worse making his life turn upside down.
  [Warning: BoyxBoy and Mature Language]

hothotchocolate hothotchocolate Oct 12, 2016
Nice first chapter!  Let's see what happens between the two of them
sandydragon1 sandydragon1 Oct 14, 2016
I'm usually turned off by stories that start with the MC waking up, but it feels justified here since Zane woke up in an unfamiliar location. That created a good amount of tension right away. You did a good job describing the setting too. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Shreya_The_Best_1602 Shreya_The_Best_1602 Oct 11, 2016
Nice chap!! Few grammatical errors but other than that, good!
7meets8 7meets8 Oct 17, 2016
                              Creepy old man
                              Abducted younger guy
                              Dead phone
                              No escape?
                              Let me go get my tea. This is getting interesting  😁