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Deep Secrets

Deep Secrets

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Mr shadow By kevin_shadow Completed

Izaya questions all he ever works and lives for. Then when finding the answer he looses himself completely. Spiraling into a depression he can't pull himself out of. He laughs at himself when found at his lowest point by the last person he wanted to be seen by

Warning// deep fanfiction. Trigger warning for some people don't like don't read. Thank you

KittyTiara KittyTiara Jun 10
I wouldn't say the grammar is great, but I can't complain because I am probably worse.  I also appreciate the effort.
Hehehehehehehee... is that soo?..
                              *2 hours later* 
                              (Izaya and shizu staring at me.)
                              Me: just f@ck eachother plz!
XDarkLunaXx XDarkLunaXx May 02
Quick advice: you switched from 3rd person to 1st person. At least put: "Izaya's POV" on top
figendog figendog Dec 30, 2016
Here is one example of bad grammar since you asked me to point the mistakes out.