Deep Secrets

Izaya questions all he ever works and lives for. Then when finding the answer he looses himself completely. Spiraling into a depression he can't pull himself out of. He laughs at himself when found at his lowest point by the last person he wanted to be seen by


Warning// deep fanfiction. Trigger warning for some people don't like don't read. Thank you

anime
comfort
depression
duarara
fanfiction
hurt
izaya
shizaya
shizuo
yaoi

I wouldn't say the grammar is great, but I can't complain because I am probably worse.  I also appreciate the effort.

Hehehehehehehee... is that soo?..
                              *2 hours later* 
                              (Izaya and shizu staring at me.)
                              Me: just f@ck eachother plz!

Quick advice: you switched from 3rd person to 1st person. At least put: "Izaya's POV" on top

"His skin as pale as the walls" 
                              This makes me wanna go to a wall, and talk to it

When your mad at the babe but you don't want them to get a sore neck lol😍

The story itself is pretty good, but somehow, the style and grammar mistakes just tick me off too much. Sorry, I'm not trying to be rude or anything. You already wrote more then I was able to, but in my opinion, you could practice the writing itself a bit. It needs a slight fixing.