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The Dragons of Kalda (Editing)

The Dragons of Kalda (Editing)

5.1K Reads 755 Votes 52 Part Story
Cynthia Varady By CynthiaVarady Completed

When best friends, Millie and Astrid stumbled upon an old chest containing clues to a hidden treasure, they never counted on it leading them to the enchanted world of Kalda where magic is real and dragons once ruled the land. Nor did they ever imagine that their found treasure could be the doom for both Kalda and our world.

Amazing cover art provided by @Krazydiamond

  • agwritingawards
  • dragons
  • fantasy
  • mages
  • magic
  • portals
  • witches
AudreyTLennox AudreyTLennox Jul 24, 2017
Hey! Intriguing start. I'm not completely sure what is happening yet or who is fighting and why, but I'm sure it will become clearer. There's a bit of head bopping but I honestly didn't mind. I actually didn't notice until towards the end. As with all your stories, very well written and engaging.
AudreyTLennox AudreyTLennox Jul 24, 2017
This lake is the stuff fantasy novels should be made of. Wistful, mysterious, a little creepy... I want to go there someday. 
                              Again, love your characterization. 😊
                              I feel like this is the portal to that other world. Guess I'll soon find out...😁
AudreyTLennox AudreyTLennox Jul 24, 2017
I love how you make them characters right from the start. I'm already getting attached to them, forming images of them in my mind.
Art_Isnt_Easy124 Art_Isnt_Easy124 Dec 22, 2016
Oh I thought it was like a "sticky note" that was private and I was telling my self where to start next time😂😂😂
Kristiekc Kristiekc Dec 31, 2016
And why not. It works well as a prologue actually. Half the time chapters have to be given other slots ( well mine do, or completely deleted to spare people ) Good idea , and happy Okay Better new year ahead , I wish you :))
CelWrites CelWrites Nov 15, 2016
Nice beginning! I liked how you introduced the lake and both of the girls. You've really got my attention. I'm super curious about the lake and the reason why it is the way it is, and that means for the girls.