Into The Moon (Book one) ........(First few chapters need serious editing)

Into The Moon (Book one) ........(First few chapters need serious editing)

40 Part Story 277K Reads 3.2K Votes
leighxxx By leighxxx Completed

Abby Grace is a normal seventeen year old girl, well normal in the sense that she wants to meet a guy, make some friends and be like all the other "normal" kids..... Abbys problem is her dad's dead and her mom's an alcoholic and moves her around a lot, a hell of a lot. At least now her Aunt has stepped in to help and keep her settled . Abby hopes and dreams might just come true........ but then again Abby has never done anything the easy way.....
    hey guys the first few chapters on this story arent brilliant due to laptop and net problems so they had to be done on my phone. but please keep reading it gets so much better..............

leighxxx leighxxx Jun 15, 2012 07:49PM
@xoxocalliexoxo yeah i know it needs editing its just getting around to it
barbie23 barbie23 Jun 08, 2012 07:40PM
@barbie23 because its wicked good. Never would have thougjt it was your first.
leighxxx leighxxx Apr 06, 2012 08:59PM
@HoneybeeS thanks so much means a lot to know u enjoyed it xxx
HoneybeeS HoneybeeS Apr 06, 2012 06:34PM
I love the use of descriptions and enjoyed reading this chater very much although it was a little short
leighxxx leighxxx Mar 26, 2012 08:31PM
@Mr_Aek thanks u know i need to edit the first few chapters, the grammer and spelling picks up later on, on the ones that dont need so much editing. but thanks for the comments, every little helps :o)
leighxxx leighxxx Mar 04, 2012 09:50PM
@xxxMariri555 thanks yeah i know i need to seriously edit its having the time, and thank you so much for the vote hope you like the rest of the story and thank you for giving it a chance xxx