My Soul on Trial

My Soul on Trial

2K Reads 21 Votes 4 Part Story
fakeredhead By fakeredhead Completed

Upon his death, Eric anticpates seeing his maker. However, he is surprised to find that both God and Satan are there waiting for him. Eric now has to watch his eternal fate be determine while both God and Satan review the events of his life.

kadebg kadebg Jun 21, 2011
Actually, I like the storyline, but you need practice with the writing itself.
BreakYourHeart BreakYourHeart Mar 26, 2011
I really love how different this story is compared to others, it helps keep the readers attention.  I also like how you put your message into your story.  It's great, keep it up :)
fakeredhead fakeredhead Dec 24, 2010
@StevieRae100 I just saw that the first chapter saved without all of the paragraphs I inputed in word. I fixed those. As far as how he died, that will be disclosed later in the book....
BringMeTheLight BringMeTheLight Dec 24, 2010
Much better lay out in this chapter. Good so far and inspiring.
BringMeTheLight BringMeTheLight Dec 24, 2010
I reccomend putting paragraphs in it would make it a lot easier to read and also maybe adding something more onto the beginning like how he died. But it's good :)
Desultory Desultory Dec 17, 2010
Your story is not something I'd usually enjoy. But when I think about it I am grateful for the great life God has given me. It is inspiring to be a better person.