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The Trembling Child: Birth

The Trembling Child: Birth

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Aaliyah By Starzz_Lovergirl Updated Jan 01, 2011

Rebecca Young is half human half mondroid. Mondroids are the lowest things in the land. Humans are the rulers of the land after the Dragons extinction700 years ago. Dragons are a wise and powerful race but with the deception of humans, they were overthrown and killed. But a blue Dragon has hatched for Rebecca. A Dragon she names Cerulean.Will this Dragon be the last hope for Rebecca to save her race, the mondroids? She meets a mysterious stranger that helps her on her adventure of saving the mondroids and rebuild the race of Dragons.

Floralfox Floralfox Feb 04, 2013
Grammar and errors here and there, but I can see what you were aiming for, continue to try and improve!
Starzz_Lovergirl Starzz_Lovergirl Jan 01, 2011
@dreamernow31 Thanks. I didn't put much work into it but it still feels good to know that people enjoy it.
dreamernow31 dreamernow31 Jan 01, 2011
This is cool! Very well written and I can really imagine the scenes! :)